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Look What I've Done
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
on
Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 02:52:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You put me under a spell
Telling me everything bout you that went well
But you left some deets out
That I have figured out
And I can't look at you the same
Cuz you're not what I thought you were
You're cute and you're funny
But believe me Im no dummy
Ive figured you out
You have that innocent smile
The kind that drives me wild
But that's all gone
Im afraid that I have went too far
With this plan in my mind
I thought that you were gonna be mine
Now Im looking for a way out,I'll admit that I was blind
Although its this crush Im trying to end
Don't worry we can still be friends
But please that's all we can be
I wish it didnt work out this way
I cant say Im ok
But now we're like night and day
Im afraid that I have went too far
With this plan in my mind
I thought that you were gonna be mine
Now Im looking for a way out,I'll admit that I was blind
But there's something now that I must tell you
I have been dishonest with you too
Im not the girl you saw when you met me
Take a second look at me and see
Copyright ©
Deidra_Carmichael
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2009-11-11 14:52:54]
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Re: Look What I've Done
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 04:20:17 PM AEST
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Powerful write
I love it
Best of luck
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Re: Look What I've Done
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 04:48:01 PM AEST
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A good rhyme scheme and a lovely style.
-Phil |
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Re: Look What I've Done
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 7th February 2019 @ 03:38:43 AM AEST
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Lifes reality....
Somewhat sad but uplifting too.
Getting to know someone can be pure drama and it would be great to skip that phase if possible.
People sell themselves like you sell a used car. They don/'/t speak of the bad. Great write! |
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