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The picture I see
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
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Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 12:54:15 PM in AEST
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How shall I describe the picture I see
One of delight, charm, and exquisite features
Why, such qualities belong to one of God's magnificent creatures
Your voice is like a serenade that brings me into paradise
With an accent that carries beautiful rhythm
How I shall describe your eyes
They hypnotize me into a trance of awe and charisma
If only they could meet mine as we show how we both feel
But now I want to describe the inner you
The person who tops you off, makes you who you are today
He is comedian like and knows how to put me in a good mood
He is very well liked yet he still doesn't know the whole story
This person may think he has the picture right but has a lot to learn
For he is the one for whom I yearn
Now that I've described the picture I see
I hope he can see the picture in me.
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Re: The picture I see
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 04:43:36 PM AEST
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Well finished off, a great last line.
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