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Mortal blood
Contributed by
Lisa_Fisher
on
Thursday, 3rd April 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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she faces north her hair blowing in the breeze as the clouds seeps through the trees the night crawls in she walks alone who will be her next victim to take home she treads quietly making no sound her feet barely touching the ground as the rain bears softly splattering as it lands down
her dark hair is covered by her hood as her next victim is drained out of blood she makes no sound as she walks away takes a route home and sleeps yet another day
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2003-04-03 05:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Mortal blood
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 3rd April 2003 @ 07:20:27 PM AEST (User
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Excellent work Lisa, I like the dark aspect of this poem, makes me want to be the next victim, good job, keep it up. |
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