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Stuck Inside My Head
Contributed by
DanMWinters
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Tuesday, 17th November 2009 @ 05:34:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Blue skies in the morning
Red skies in the night
No clouds on the horizon
A true sailors delight
A flag snaps to attention
Waving in the breeze
The geese honk loudly oer head
Winging north with ease
I thought Id get away
Go where she had never tread
Get myself distracted
Shes stuck inside my head
Therere other women out there
Hell, theres some right here
But my vision never falters
Her face is always clear
The breeze is on, the sun beats down
More beauty than Paris
Theres nowhere I feel more at home
Than right next to the sea
I thought I would be free here
But what Ive found instead
No matter where I go to
Shes stuck inside my head
The people here are friendly
I feel I know them well
But Ive got this cloistered secret
I know Ill never tell
My work progresses smoothly
Ive got a job to do
But Im avoiding that old saying
To thine own self, be true
Though the heavens dim so quickly
And I find I crave my bed
My mind will not stop working
For shes stuck inside my head
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DanMWinters
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2009-11-17 17:34:37]
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Re: Stuck Inside My Head
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by longhaircg on
Tuesday, 17th November 2009 @ 05:41:50 PM AEST
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great writing, I enjoyed reading this,
i can relate
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Re: Stuck Inside My Head
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 17th November 2009 @ 06:48:17 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
This is a beautiful, clasic write.
Awesome writing.
smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Stuck Inside My Head
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 17th November 2009 @ 08:34:34 PM AEST
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| walking and talking by the sea with a stranger and his inner most thoughts, i enjoyed the walk |
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Re: Stuck Inside My Head
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by jessb3 on
Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 12:50:03 AM AEST
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| Great work! I know exactly how it feels to have someone stuck inside your head. |
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Re: Stuck Inside My Head
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by Ambivalence on
Saturday, 21st November 2009 @ 05:05:47 PM AEST
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u shouldnt let thoughts bottle up, you could get a heavy headache ha!
but u explained your thoughts very beautifully here, just wonderful...
take care
-K.Z. |
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