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Black Roses(A Gothic Romance)
Contributed by
BlackRoses00
on
Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 01:10:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Born within a flickering of candlelight
A dark passion is being aroused
Clothed in thy ebony gown of midnight
As thou breathes, thy beauty is exposed
I present to thee, a thorny black rose
As a symbol of our love and passion
As thou grips thy symbol, thy scarlet flows
I taste thy scarlet with pure satisfaction
I smile as, within the hall, music begins to sound
To thee, my beauty, my arms I extend
Thine body next to mine, my heart begins to pound
And now, please, your hand would you lend?
In harmony our bodies sway in motion
As the dark music pervades our souls
Within my heart, there is a stirring of emotion
For I am so in love with you, my black rose
Wouldst thee look into my eyes, my dear
And breathe life itself into me
When together we are both of good cheer
You are the darker side of heaven I see
I steal a kiss from thy blood red lips
The Earth itself freezes within time
Intoxicated as when from a fine wine one sips
A power only existing in the wisest bards rhyme
Skin softer than the silken black petals
While yet as pale as the moon
Thy body shimmers like the precious metals
Within your voice, the Sirens croon
What love spell hast thee cast upon me?
With thy grasp upon the blackness of magik
Thou always seems to be the only thing I see
For every second without thee is tragic
Our bodies flow around the hall as one
I can feel the passion flow from our souls
With such energy as from the sun
For I love you through eternity, my black rose.
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Re: Black Roses(A Gothic Romance)
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by ginsdance on
Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 01:39:12 PM AEST
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This was beautiful! Thanks for sharing!
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Re: Black Roses(A Gothic Romance)
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by chatabox on
Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 07:46:02 PM AEST
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mmmmmmmmm, refreshing their bodies with love....
dark and sensual.......loved it. |
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Re: Black Roses(A Gothic Romance)
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by Emmie74 on
Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 08:44:19 PM AEST
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wow, this is so amazing... just the feel, the images... wow.... its beautiful. i love it. very nice work.
~Em |
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Re: Black Roses(A Gothic Romance)
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Friday, 2nd August 2002 @ 06:57:39 AM AEST
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| You did it again, blackrose... I am left speechless. This piece is fantastic!!! |
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Re: Black Roses(A Gothic Romance)
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by mckayla on
Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 11:28:57 AM AEST
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Wonderful wrie! I enjoyed the read!We both have a thing for black roses, yet different meanings to us!!!! mines called black rose.you might enjoy it.
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Re: Black Roses(A Gothic Romance)
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by RebelRose on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 10:22:18 AM AEST
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| I love your poem cuz too me that is exactully how a gothic romance is. It is very powerful too. |
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Re: Black Roses(A Gothic Romance)
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by deadbloodyrose on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 02:53:31 PM AEST
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| you are full of talent.. this is an amazing poem i loved every line of it.. wonderful piece.. AMI JO |
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Re: Black Roses(A Gothic Romance)
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 10:15:27 PM AEST
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If I had more than two hands, you'd get as many thumbs up as I had hands...but really, this piece is amazing...beautifully dark, and written with such compassion...Bravo on this, bravo
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