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Contributed by
MoonlightKiss
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Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 02:54:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Swirling colours of the skies
And oceans of blue in your eyes
Whispers of love in your smile
Moonlight kissed stars for awhile
Twirling shades of purple and blue
Intertwining like me and you
Hear the night breeze speak
Where my knees are growing weak
Whirling thoughts around me
There's more to us than they see
Waves on the beach at night
As silent as when we take flight
Swirling winds of promise
And I've never felt like this
Whispers of beauty and love
As innocent as light from above
Twirling a dance in the starlight
Intertwining, shining so bright
Hear the vows of forever
Where the end is, never
Whirling through the forest, they run
There are two hearts beating as one
Waves slipping over the sand
As time drifts by, hand in hand
Listen to the echoes of our love, so promising
There's nothing to fear; the earth is merely singing.
Copyright ©
MoonlightKiss
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2009-11-18 14:54:00]
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Re: Listen
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by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 05:04:05 PM AEST
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Yes! Yes! Yes!
This is orgasmic! God I love the way you write my friend! Love it to pieces x
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Re: Listen
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by hopelezz on
Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 01:08:22 AM AEST
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nature's bless...
nice poem..
-HoPeLezZ |
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Re: Listen
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 01:52:10 PM AEST
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Wow. One of your best I think. It combined a lovely flow, excellent rhyme and vivid imagery all together in one magnificent piece.
Stunning!
-Phil |
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