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Your Eyes
Contributed by
MoonlightKiss
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Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 03:02:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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You captivate me with your eyes
Those eyes are my ocean
Bluer than the skies
Depths of every emotion.
Resonating affection and care
In your gaze, I am frozen
Found something so rare
Glad it's me you've chosen.
You mesmerize me with your eyes
Those eyes are my home
There are never any lies
Never a reason to roam.
Intimidating, they pierce me
Seeing down into my soul
Showing me what I will be
They keep me so whole.
You show me strength with your eyes
My heart remains beating
You love me at sunrise
Yet I am still breathing.
Proving to me that you are
Here with a devotion
You are my shining star
Your eyes are my emotion.
Copyright ©
MoonlightKiss
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2009-11-18 15:02:51]
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Re: Your Eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 04:51:30 PM AEST
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Oh Moonlight!
This is sooo beautiful!
I can't stop reading it over and over,
it makes my heart sing with joy!
This really means something to me, Thankyou so much for sharing it x
Luv Star x x x |
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Re: Your Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 01:46:21 PM AEST
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Very skillfully structured and presented, good work!
-Phil |
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