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BOOM
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
on
Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 04:56:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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You were my gasoline
You made everything so obscene
My own mind was the match
It was a fire blazing couldn't be put out
In these desperate times
I engross myself into my mind
Thinking to much, hearing so little
But some how you got me caught in the middle
Of your little web of lies
As I may try
I can't break free
you'll be what ignites me
The fuse is lit
The fireworks will soon begin
Who will be here to see the big finally at the end?
It's going to be a "BLAST"
At last it all seems to come to a bloom
It all seems to come out in the open in the end
Let's let the fireworks begin and it goes
BOOM
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Voice of the Silent
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2009-11-18 16:56:36]
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Re: BOOM
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by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 05:15:48 PM AEST
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This is very powerful writing! Good stuff!
It musters up a great deal of feisty spirit in you! A great write, thankyou x
Luv Star x x x |
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Re: BOOM
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by JT on
Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 06:06:09 PM AEST
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| there comes a time when you cant hold it in anymore.great write. -JT- |
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Re: BOOM
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by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 08:32:51 PM AEST
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Great writing. Nice wording. I can get the intense feeling from your word choice.
Heidi |
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