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A Perfect Day
Contributed by
joydeep_nath
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Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 07:52:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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a perfect rain washed day
a perfectly washed up point in time
when the skies roar a melancholy;
let loose, the heart crumbles under its hollowness
the eyes strain to find souls on the horizon-
and stream out the despair inconsolably.
once more the load is spent
once more shall we return-
to such a perfect day
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2009-11-20 07:52:34]
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Re: A Perfect Day
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by dirk-velvet on
Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 01:21:40 PM AEST
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"a perfect rain washed day."
a perfect
line
to open
a
perfect
poem.
"once more shall we return."
so true.
... so true.
( Great Write, love your flow ! ! ! ) |
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