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Leaving
Contributed by
Durra1
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Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 08:05:49 AM in AEST
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What is the purpose of living if we are turned to ashes
If at the end forced to respond to the light that flashes
Anyone answer me enlighten my person with a reason
How can i enjoy the beauty of life, my chronic automn season
Like falling leaves, my hope in future fall bit by bit
Stetching my sick complaing heart i order in this world you must fit
Scared from the future's ghost im just tired
Like a person who walked centuries barefoot and then his feet got wired
Frightened from his enemy, Past who stole people from me who in the light got lost
Hapiness inform my weak bloody heart how much do you cost
Can i open my eyes to the birth of a new day
though my soul dying to departure and can't in my body stay
Last chapter of the season is us cleaned by them who on us splashes
And we should return home and be burried with the trashes
(When i wrote it i was in the state when a person just wonders why does he exist remembering all dear people who i didnt have the chance to tell them bye before they departured to the unknown)
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Re: Leaving
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by northernlights on
Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 08:23:10 AM AEST
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| Even if reality appears to be depressing writing in an expressive way as you have done communicates questions and feelings that alot of us ask about life and then in relating to your writing this can make living easier cuz we realise we're not alone with the questions or the way we feel.I for one am glad you wrote this |
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Re: Leaving
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by spud on
Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 09:15:57 AM AEST
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Hi,
Well written.
Questions we all ask ourselves. As you seek your
answers, think of those whom you love, and
who love you in return, and are still here. Would
they want your 'departure'?
Tommy
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Re: Leaving
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 06:43:41 PM AEST
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Great write. I am under the belief that even those who have departed can hear us and knows when we tell them good-bye, no matter when we get to tell them. Glad you shared this, You are not alone in your feelings I am sure.
Deadwriter
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Re: Leaving
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th November 2009 @ 09:30:47 AM AEST
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| A poem is never to depressing to share...you never know when the words are what another needs to hear to know there not alone. Thanks for choosing to share it. |
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