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Burning diamond
Contributed by
poetguy2212
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Saturday, 21st November 2009 @ 03:18:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I cant believe a girl like u exist in the same world as i
who takes away my breath just by walking by
who captured my thoughts and my deepest dream
like water trapped in a never ending stream
i can see the world in ur smile and in ur eyes
they are like a burning diamond that never dies
that is why u are so special and very rare
i just want to hold u and show u that i care
we care so much for each other that we shall not be taken apart
because ur name has been engraved deep down inside my heart
just promise me that u will be honest and true
and i promise to treat u like a princess and cherish u
i never want to hurt u or to cause u any pain
if i ever did my heart would go insane
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2009-11-21 15:18:00]
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Re: Burning diamond
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by shelby on
Saturday, 21st November 2009 @ 05:47:17 PM AEST
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Poetguy,
a beautiful write start to finish.
The only thing that bothers me is the i, u, ur
do not abbreviate those words in poetry it takes away from it I think. Other than that good work!
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