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My heaven and my angel
Contributed by
DevilWithAHalo
on
Sunday, 22nd November 2009 @ 07:36:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Deep in the dark she walks through the woods, The moon glistens behind her on her chocolate brown hair. Long eyelashes beat back and forth as the summer air whips around her face. Full red lips pulled into a smile, bright enough to light the darkest room. Slightly tanned skin, giving out an addictive smell of warmth and love. Bright blue-green eyes, more perfect than the rarest diamond. Her slender frame slides in and out of trees with elegance and grace. This young woman, graced with charm and beauty Is the rarest sight to see But when you gaze upon her perfection You will know just how special she is For no one else could be born with such radiance No one else better fitting the name angel The greatest treasure to be held in this world And she lies in my arms To serve and protect her Is my lifes mission And that I will do With a smile on my face And a song in my heart For being hers And having her as my own Is my heaven and she My angel
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Re: My heaven and my angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Alexa_Bachtel on
Sunday, 22nd November 2009 @ 11:43:16 AM AEST (User
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Really beautiful and little mystical poem. That woman who you with is incredibly lucky. So keep your angel 'cos she deserves it, according to your words.
Bravo one more time.
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Re: My heaven and my angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by MorguesMatter on
Tuesday, 24th November 2009 @ 08:22:51 AM AEST (User
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She's hot goodness, No but Really your tone as well as your depiction conveyed a perfect vision in your mind I saw the woods the dimonds the elegance of your angel and it touched my heart to know you found true love and that is beautiful-Morgues |
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Re: My heaven and my angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by spud on
Wednesday, 25th November 2009 @ 02:44:49 AM AEST (User
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Hi,
This is a stunning affirmation of love.
Devoid of all cliches that sometimes permeate
love poetry - unique in its style.
Well written!
Tommy
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