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Shallow Abandonment

Contributed by xnickix7 on Monday, 23rd November 2009 @ 07:44:16 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Water so deep cant touch the ground
So far away I wont be found
I close my eyes and float away
When will I stop? I cannot say
I cannot sleep
Im in too deep
Ive gone too far
Blood thick as tar
I gave up now and its too late
Too far now Im past a clean slate
Im scared; Im hurt and full of shame
Its my mistake Im one to blame
I felt there was no other way
Now here I bleed on my last day
I let it get the best of me
For here I can no longer be
Glimmering lights all in my head
Is this what its like to be dead?
My rapid breaths begin to slow
My life, I have nothing to show
Blackened clouds begin to pour
Eyes roll back I see no more
Crystal ball says theres no future
Wounds too deep I cannot suture
So many lies where is the truth?
Please help me now I need a sleuth
What is it that Ive become?
Fallen victim to this slum
Who am I but my worst foe
Mangled hands are all I know
Fit so tight around my throat
Bruises covered by my coat
Against my head I press the gun
Pull the trigger, for I am done

Copyright © xnickix7 ... [ 2009-11-23 19:44:16]
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