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Revenge

Contributed by andrewhs on Tuesday, 24th November 2009 @ 03:29:45 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

My love has been taken away
By the pain of it all
So upset, so hurt, so deceived
Betrayed
Did I see it coming ?
Youve left me dazed
And I don't know where to turn

Here and now
Feels like I'm drowning
Cant eat, cant sleep
If I close my eyes Im tormented
I can just see the two of you together
Im tortured - And I feel so alone

Seems to me
I'm exactly where you wanted me
Powerless
Whilst you were all powerful
With what you both knew
Kidding me along
Loving me only when he allowed

Revenge - with the cut of a knife
Straight through my heart

You have your friends to put their arms around you
To comfort you
And the only person that can comfort me is you
But that can never be
For you are the one who held the knife
Did I deserve this?
You obviously dont love me despise me perhaps
Whats done is done We cant go back
And now I stand alone
Helpless
Drowning in a sea of questions
And the worst part is the not knowing...

Copyright © andrewhs ... [ 2009-11-24 03:29:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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