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Unknown Fate

Contributed by MidoOo on Tuesday, 24th November 2009 @ 03:17:52 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



This story is not based up on ANY reality and it has nothing to do with anyoneIt's js a thought tht passed my mind

She is comin..I'm Sure she will
She will show upShe always Does
I Hv FaithI Hv Trust
She Hasn't Yet LeftShe is still in my heart
And I'm keeping her there
Till The Day I Die
Till The Day I Can't Smile
Till The Day My Soul Fly
She will be my friend
She will be my fate
She will be the one I Like
She will be my only One
There he satso silent and quitedespite of his mindwhich was in a fightwith shiny memories and lightsthere he satdoing nothing at allbut waiting for her so annoyedat their lonely secret spotthe place where she rescued his souland the place where he later- will avoid


It's been a long timefour scary nights! He spent with tearful eyessomething is wrongsomething isn't righthis mind said sobut his heart said otherwiseDon't goShe will Pass byDon't goYou Know she doesn't lieYou Know she is an ANGELAnd how could Angels lie??? Didn't you like her smile? Don't You want to see it another time??? Then wait till she arrivesShe might be at SkyOr somewhere in paradisewithin a wingless angel sightThat's how she looksWith her sweet smileAt least through your own eyes
Now a warm voice from deepComes up so obvious and aliveI won't leaveAs long as Im AliveI will be nearAs long as I Breath
That's wht she saidAt her very last nightWith a sweet smile...And a look of sympathizeWhich he didn't knw why??? Until later byHe Figured out whyTht look wasn't a lieAnd Beyond tht smileWas a lot of shouts and criesAs She said deep inside:
I'm sorry young guy
But I really hv to fly
Forgive me cuz this time
Will be the last smile
I knw u need me by
I knw u can't survive
Without my help and guide
I knw u're weak and shy
And Can't yet bite
I Knw u will cry
But I'm sorry sweet guy
And She Read in his eyes:
U're my cute butterfly
U're my guardian Angel Pie
U took me in your life
U held me so tight
I felt safe and tough
And within your arms I Cried
And in your eyes I Hide
I swear I could die
Js to see u smile
The smile tht makes u shine Bright
U're everything I Desire
In this huge worldwide
Which doesn't worth a smile
Or a wink from your eyes

Tht was there last eye- to eyeAnd they both said goodbyeBut he stopped her with a smileThey forgot their usual ByeSo he said holding her hand: I Luv U more than stars, glow at night and make it shine
She looked at his eyesAnd whispered so nice: I Luv U more by, Than they sparkle at skyBut Then she said insideI'm sorry my heartBut this is the last timeWer'e gonna hug tightIt is the last timeOur Luv shall shine brightI will Miss U Kind guy
Witout any further actionsHe walked her to the taxi standAnd as she waved once to the cars, he waved twice to say goodbye
Now she is goneNow he could stop tht fake smileNow he could remove his disguiseAnd delete tht artificial smileTo Reveal the real face behindThe scared and terrified eyesAnd the sad look of a worried childThe one she didn't recognizeCuz he always used to hideHis biggest fear of lifeTht she might leave him one day, but she js couldn't sayHe was so afraidCuz he felt tht day wasn't awayHe felt tht she was slipping awayHe would do anything to make her stayHe would challenge the whole world, js to keep her thereHe would even jump of a planeTo see tht sweet smile of her'sHw would give her his soulWitout any single sortOf regret or a doubt knotHe would, if he could
He took one last walkTo Clear his mind and thoughtsAnd maybe renew his soulBut unfortunately all his effortsLead him to nowhere KnownSo he went straight homeWhere he sat all aloneWith his paper, pen and soulAnd so he went onWriting a letter to his friend, telling her everything he felt:.
Hey there u sweet
I Js waned to say
Tht I'm Really Afraid
Cuz I feel sth strange
Tht U Dont wanna stay
Promise me u wont leave
Promise me u will always b near
I need u so much my dear
My guardian angel being
I'm SORRY for any mistake
tht I might hv done or said
I promise I will always be here
Whenever u need me to cheer
I'll give u my shoulder to cry on
I'll give u my arms to hold
I'll give u my soul so u can fly
We will both fly high
To the land of NEVERLAND!!!
Where u always wanned to ground
And where everyone around
Is happy and satisfied
I promise I'll take u there
If U js promised to stay
And nvr moved away
I CANT let u go
It's the first time I say:
Pls Dont go away
Could U js STAY???
Could U not Leave Me Babe???

He couldnt sleep tht nightBut he spent all nightStaring at stars so quiteAnd soon he saw the lightSneaking in so brightSo he ran off fastDressed up so NiceTook his letter in handAnd rushed to his bikeTo last night's spotBut He Was js shocked!!! She is not there yetAnd the place seemed deadHe sat on the benchSo silent and stillHe held his letter so tightLooking around every once and whileTo Check if she has arrivedBut hours passed byHas she forgottin I??? It Cant be right!!! And wht a Rainy Night!!! He didnt notice the skyWhn it turned into greyAnd the clouds heavy with rainSuddenly stroked to earthHeavy rain and lightsAnd no one was thereExcept him sitting thereAlone on the wet bench

Now It's getting coldBut he said I wont goShe might pass byI knw I hv to stayCuz I hv much to sayAs he looked at his letterHe held it so tightTo protect it from rainBut the boy wasn't strong enoughSo he couldnt last longAnd soon he fell to the groundAnd his letter was fully dampHe suffered to get it backIgnoring the ache in his backFinally, with shaky eyes and handsHe opened the wet sheetTo see wht's left to readIt was a messy drowned sheetExcept for 4 clear wordsWords were very harshThey forced him to cryIt was her voice tht said:

SORRY I CAN'T STAY!!!!

The Boy fell on his backAnd everything turned black.

Whispers from awayFamiliar voice said:
Hun I'm here
Wake up, pls dont leave...
I promised I would stay,
and here I'm today

Finally she arrived!!! She knew he wouldn't surviveShe knew she needs him byAnd she js couldn't deny, How much she luved his heartAnd his beautiful brown eyesNow hugging him tightShe said with wet eyes:
I'm so sorry my dear
I promise I wont leave
No matter how bad it seemed
I promise I will Be near
Js wake up and dont leave.
Wake up my dear babe
But was it too late???

U Decide his Fate...







Copyright © MidoOo ... [ 2009-11-24 15:17:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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