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First Love
Contributed by
KeyboardPlayer
on
Tuesday, 24th November 2009 @ 05:40:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Among the hundreds of people I knew
You were the quietest through my eyes
Slowly and quietly floating away
Almost entirely forgotten
You use to smile at me at times
Hiding it as you were very shy
Exposing it more and more
Like a water lily blooming blithely
The way you frolicked with your hair
So innocent and cute
Noiselessly flowing through the air
Reminding me the winds in my daydreams
Your eyes are like a portal
Leading me to a world I never knew
Feeling things I never felt before
Lost in your emotions
I have strong feelings for you
Getting more severe as time goes
Building up in my heart
Causing a massive burst of sensibility
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KeyboardPlayer
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2009-11-24 17:40:01]
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Re: First Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by starlightstarbright on
Wednesday, 25th November 2009 @ 01:44:56 PM AEST
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oh... to be the girl that poem is about!
Beautifully written i loved it!
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Re: First Love
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by Puppy on
Thursday, 26th November 2009 @ 08:26:25 AM AEST
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i loved it..... it has such a beautiful flow....
Puppy :) |
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