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Conclusion of A Broken Soul
Contributed by
xnickix7
on
Tuesday, 24th November 2009 @ 08:00:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Lifeless, broken at my feet,
Dying slowly in the street,
My heart beats faster in my chest,
It starts to hurt, I need to rest,
I grab my throat, I cant get air,
My lips turn blue, I pull my hair,
Becoming weak, I begin to fall,
Helplessly grab for the blood-stained wall,
Piercing pain as I hit the ground,
Desperate choking is the only sound,
All the lights begin to fade,
It is the end, the dues are paid,
Darkness arrives, no more day,
Paralyzed, nothing I can say,
Painful knives begin to stab,
Running fast to catch the cab,
Cries echo in the night,
Ive fallen victim to this fight,
Endless lies and broken dreams,
Bleeding throat from desperate screams,
Help for I am going to die,
Fearful, alone I begin to cry,
Nobody left, Im on my own,
Out, escapes a dying moan,
Angels come and take me away,
For in this life I cannot stay.
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Re: Conclusion of A Broken Soul
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 24th November 2009 @ 08:32:10 PM AEST
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I love the dark deep despair in this flow
beautiful |
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Re: Conclusion of A Broken Soul
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by Brianimal on
Saturday, 1st January 2011 @ 12:57:22 PM AEST
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| I pictured that kind of initial grief that becomes so great, that you fall to your knees and sob but make no sound. This is one of my favorites... |
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