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Turn it Inside Out So I Can See
Contributed by
inevitable
on
Wednesday, 25th November 2009 @ 02:36:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Heart on the sleeve
stitched there
*******Face in the clouds
drinking in dreams
danger to reality
***********My soul lights up
like a star glowing in the night sky
Shine bright in the darkness
in the shadow of death
********waiting for a crack in the wall
a hand to reach through
you speak so incoherent
but tug at my flesh
wanting to come inside
to breathe breath through me
thunder shakes the sky
rolls beneath my body
I'm still reeling,
from that trip we took
Copyright ©
inevitable
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2009-11-25 14:36:55]
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Re: Turn it Inside Out So I Can See
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 02:16:11 PM AEST
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Another very creative piece from you. I liked the use of stars, I thought that was interesting. I also loved how you concluded it, I thought it was beautiful.
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Re: Turn it Inside Out So I Can See
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th June 2010 @ 01:41:21 AM AEST
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Quite interesting, intriguing and the images!!! Whoa!
Huh, the three "I's" sorry that was just a random thought that just hit me about my comment.
Carry on with the wicked great poems. 
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