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AS WE WAIT FOR OUR DREAMS TO COME TRUE
Contributed by
TOMH
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Thursday, 26th November 2009 @ 06:57:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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REMEMBER OUR DREAMS, HAVE THEY COME THROUGH?
OUR DREAMS NEVER ENDING, OUR DREAMS EVER TRUE.
WE BIDE AWAY HOURS, PASSING NIGHT INTO DAY.
JUST THINKING AND DREAMING OUR LONGINGS AWAY.
WE DREAM WHEN WERE YOUNG TO BE OLDER AND WISE.
AS WE GROW OLDER, WE DREAM IN DISQUISE.
WE SEARCH FOR OUR YOUTH THAT HAS GONE BY THE WAY.
AND HOPE THAT OUR DREAMS ARE RESTORED YESTERDAY.
DREAMS ARE FOR DREAMERS ERE YOUNG OR GRAY.
REGARLESS OF AGE, DREAMS ARE HERE TO STAY.
DREAM ON FOR THE THINGS THAT YOU HAVE OR HAVE NOT.
WITH GOD BESIDE YOU, YOUR DREAMS MEAN ALOT.
TOM HARBAUGH
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TOMH
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2009-11-26 06:57:26]
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Re: AS WE WAIT FOR OUR DREAMS TO COME TRUE
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th November 2009 @ 01:53:28 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
I think this is a really nice poem. I like the concept & subject.
Just wondering why all caps? Personally, I think it reads a lot easier and takes from the finesse of poetry with all caps.
Is the first line in the second stanza supposed to be we dream when we were young to be older and wise or we dream when we're young to be older and wise?
Just curious.
Take care,
Tim
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