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Broken soul
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
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Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 06:20:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Many things can be broken
Countless things I must say
Some may mourn these broken things
Such as hearts, bodies, and minds
But does anybody mourn the broken soul
The ones that may have messed up a few times
The ones that have been traveling wayward
Tell me is there any mercy
For the broken soul
Again many things can be broken
Some of what can be said
Is able to be fixed or mended
But is there a cure for the broken soul
The kind that feels its too late to change
The kind which seems to captivate the minds of many
Yet now I know there is mercy for the broken soul
The kind which used to be innocent long ago
There's forgiveness for the sinful nature
Yes I know there is mercy
For the broken soul
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Deidra_Carmichael
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2009-11-27 06:20:16]
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Re: Broken soul
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by inkmaster on
Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 11:51:13 AM AEST
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| Very nice a good read..inkmaster |
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Re: Broken soul
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 05:26:54 PM AEST
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A very profound write. I'm never quite sure about forgiveness, some things can just never be forgiven. Then there will be the broken souls who can never be fixed, no matter how much rehabilitation and counseling they go through. But some certainly can be saved, and I think you made that point well in your poem.
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Re: Broken soul
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by shelby on
Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 08:56:57 PM AEST
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Oh this is heart touching. Beautiful work.
Yes I do believe there is mending for a broken soul this I know for a fact.
Lovely thought in this......
Michelle |
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