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I Don't.
Contributed by
EternitysLyre
on
Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 11:31:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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It Takes Every last fiber in my body Not to throw my arms around you And pull you close.
It Takes Every lingering, last resolve To rid your smile, your laughter, Your skins allure From my thoughts (For long)
And every dream, I dream of you I forget its not the truth Face first into other dreams, praying Not to wake up crying.
And I cant stop, trying To make you happy
But I dont love you.
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Re: I Don't.
(User Rating: 1 ) by laststarontheleft on
Thursday, 14th January 2010 @ 06:25:48 PM AEST (User
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Such a tangled web we weave for ourselves sometimes....
I love the candor of this poem,
"And I can’t stop, trying to make you happy But I don’t love you."
Why do we do this? I couldn't tell you if i'm honest!
Brilliant write x
Star x x x
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Re: I Don't.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th January 2010 @ 07:37:03 PM AEST (User
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I really enjoyed this. The tone is very sweet and sincere but you get to the last line and its as if someone slammed on the brakes.
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Re: I Don't.
(User Rating: 1 ) by longago on
Saturday, 12th February 2011 @ 05:36:50 PM AEST (User
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wow, just wow the amount of emotion and sincerity in this is overwhelming, amazing poem i mean AMAZING serious respect well done :) |
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