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Didn't Want To Do This
Contributed by
ShamefulShana
on
Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 12:55:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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He sits by the water waiting...
watching the beautiful blood of the one he once loved
and all this time he's tried to be strong he didn't think about the pain he was creating
but suddenly the pain rises to the surface up above
and as the pain rises he becomes something different
something no one can stop
finally the pain reaches the top
the pain switches to hate and then he explodes
and after he stares at her dead body and broken bones
he softly kisses her lifeless lips and whispers
I didn't want to do this
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ShamefulShana
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2009-11-27 12:55:17]
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Re: Didn't Want To Do This
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by Ambivalence on
Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 02:06:26 PM AEST
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violently articulate. scary how untamed emotions go over the top, as if it possesses us just at that moment, which we then regret after. i can relate to this in a different way, thanx for writing
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Re: Didn't Want To Do This
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 02:24:52 PM AEST
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I guess we are all slaves to emotion.For some those emotions take a more sinister path.
Well illustrated and intense.
Steve |
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Re: Didn't Want To Do This
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by Jessi95 on
Monday, 26th April 2010 @ 08:05:36 PM AEST
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| Wow...That has so much emotion in it...I LOVE it..thank you SO much for putting up...wow.... |
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