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A Cool Breeze
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
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Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 01:54:53 PM in AEST
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With the cool breeze on my skin
All my worries seem to go in the bin
Basking under the warm sun
There is not much that is more fun
Cloud watching on a warm summer day
Glancing as I watch the children play
As they frolic by the sea
And to take photos whilst on my knee
The picturesque of a wondrous time
My whole life is kept in rhyme
Such joy such pleasure being a dad
So happy with the pleasures I had
Leaving can be arduous though right
This when time passes in the night
With but memories never to elude
Whilst alone in my solitude
Knowing a new day will always start
And that nothing will ever keep us apart
With a cool breeze to start the new day
I will never have it any other way
Tuesday, 17 November 2009
2:21:03 PM
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Re: A Cool Breeze
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 02:02:07 PM AEST
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"All my worries go in the bin"........loved that , so straightforward, felt like you were having a conversation with a friend throughout the poem.
I sometimes think the weather feeds our emotions, it was nice to see something on a similar theme
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Re: A Cool Breeze
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by inkmaster on
Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 06:01:20 PM AEST
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| it was a great read i liked it.. inkmaster |
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Re: A Cool Breeze
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by emystar on
Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 06:27:28 PM AEST
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Very beautiful, relaxing write.
Reminds me of when I was a kid. I use to kick back on the ground and wath the sky for hours.
Awesome.
huggs, blessings, smiles,
emy |
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