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The Barrier Between Us

Contributed by Flyinglow on Tuesday, 1st December 2009 @ 09:30:33 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



I saw a man today,
And he swears he is you,
His speech is full of riddles,
Speaks of knowin the truth
But he doesn't know everything,
Cause truth is Im scared
Truth is hes not the same
But can men be compared?
To what they were,
To what you knew,
To the things they said
Can that be proof?
Cause people change
And people grow
And they may be different
From the guy you know
But somethings not right
Something doesnt make sense
I cant follow your thoughts
And its makin me tense
Theres this barrier between us
And I know you feel it too
Theres this barrier between us
And theres nothing I can do
You still have my friendship
And Im still by your side
But I have know idea whats goin on
With the thoughts you keep inside
I see you try to gather
The thoughts up in your head
And you speak to me with purpose
But I dont know what you said
So I force myself to smile
And give the support you need
Ill hope and wish and pray
That one day you will be freed.




Copyright © Flyinglow ... [ 2009-12-01 09:30:33]
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Re: The Barrier Between Us (User Rating: 1 )
by EGHarne on Friday, 4th December 2009 @ 09:02:54 PM AEST
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Very nicely done. When the reader feels what you're feeling, that's an impressive accomplishment.




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