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Painting Of Love
Contributed by
argenismichael
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Tuesday, 1st December 2009 @ 05:51:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your the angle that proves theres a God
You were the one who made me feel like I wasnt odd.
Your make me improve with your every move
Its like my little drug addiction that makes
It seems like it could only be fiction
But when i see you, you create
the friction of my heart
You hold the key to what i see
I see a dove in love
I see her with no blur
I see us in a brush, a brush that creates
a painting of Life, of Laughter and of Love
Copyright ©
argenismichael
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2009-12-01 17:51:55]
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Re: Painting Of Love
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by inkmaster on
Tuesday, 1st December 2009 @ 07:35:43 PM AEST
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| Great flow I really enjoyed this~Thanks for sharring ~~inkmaster |
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Re: Painting Of Love
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by cetblue on
Wednesday, 2nd December 2009 @ 07:26:34 PM AEST
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| I like your ideas, but the spelling and grammatical mistakes distracted my enjoyment. |
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