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My Feelings For You
Contributed by
bobbylee22
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Tuesday, 1st December 2009 @ 10:31:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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You *** me off
I get mad
You yell at me
And i get sad
We fight
We cry
And become alright
You need me
I need you
Wont let go
We'll be the few
To last forever
From young
To old
To be together
Our love
Never grows cold
Copyright ©
bobbylee22
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2009-12-01 22:31:23]
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Re: My Feelings For You
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jammy on
Tuesday, 1st December 2009 @ 11:09:42 PM AEST
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Constructive criticism:
I enjoy poetry a lot more when it is free of spelling mistakes.
This is just my preference. Just thought it might help a bit in the future.
All in all. It is a nicely written poem.
Keep it up :)
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