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Clad in Darkness
Contributed by
Aspirant
on
Friday, 4th December 2009 @ 06:11:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Empty, hungry, always wanting more
"Never open the forbidden door"
Helpless, useless, like a wand'ring foal
One day power overtakes my soul
Heavens, demons, underneath my heel
Gods and madmen, nonetheless do kneel
Light and Darkness in my shade are one
Time and Fortune by my will are spun
All Existence like a grain of sand
Endless Cosmos clutchd in my hand
Yet, there's one thing, the untouchd strand,
Ceding nothing to my high command
Hatred, fury, now arise in me
"Tell me, soulless, what your purpose be."
Aching, wanting, though unknown what for
"You must open the forbidden door."
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Aspirant
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2009-12-04 18:11:05]
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Re: Clad in Darkness
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by northernlights on
Friday, 4th December 2009 @ 10:26:02 PM AEST
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| powerful poem, strong imagery,I like the way you captured helpless as a wandring foul and how you express our place in this world like a grain of sand, well written |
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Re: Clad in Darkness
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by Voyager on
Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 04:16:23 AM AEST
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| My first thought was "this would make for a great heavy metal song" !! :-).......Try lyricizing it with a gripping, powerful voice, and its reads very well. Dark and powerful. |
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