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There Is A Hole Within The Flame
Contributed by
Cancer
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Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 10:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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there is a hole within the flame i know you don't understand but there is a hole within the flame
each time you scream in agony the hole becomes easier to see but, the hole can never be seen through the blind eyes of hope listen...
every face i see is ugly painted with hate and deceit shoulders sagging beneath the weight of a lifetime of defeat
every word i hear is a lie truth died so long ago truth is, it's all a lie it makes sense but only for so long
every inch of this world is a flame not aflame, a flame yet the fire breeds no warmth all is cold and sterile
beyond all this at the end of hope you will find the only exit
only when you've run out of hope will you run out of questions with despair, all answers are known
every single drink i take is a silent wish for death and every cigarette that i choke down is a prayer that, this time i won't catch my breath
in the end, we are all the same once you've seen past the curtains of life and glimpsed the hideous machines that turn the wheels you will all be the same race, religion, sexuality none of this will matter for once you've seen past every lie you've been told you will all scramble madly searching for the exit that lies beyond all hope
riddles with no answer are the easiest of all because you cannot be right but you cannot be wrong all that is needed is faith
unfortunately, faith is suicide
eventually, all you will have is the Nothing that lies just beyond the hole within the flame
as the flames grow darker, yet fiercer i smile and crawl through the hole
yes, there is a hole within the flame and i'm stepping through to the otherside don't you see? the hole is sweet death and the flame is the pain of this life
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2003-04-04 22:25:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: There Is A Hole Within The Flame
(User Rating: 1 ) by karoody on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 11:03:18 PM AEST (User
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there is a lot of meaning to these words. they are very thought provoking, forming a powerful piece of work
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Re: There Is A Hole Within The Flame
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 11:07:52 PM AEST (User
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Dark as life, I like it.
It has cold feel to it, With a true meaning behind the words.
If one looks with their eyes, and hears with their heart then the truth you portray through this poem will be understood.
Very good work. |
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Re: There Is A Hole Within The Flame
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 03:40:52 AM AEST (User
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Very creative!
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emy |
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