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tilt
Contributed by
ming
on
Sunday, 6th December 2009 @ 07:34:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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part of a dance
the swirl of time
and motion
spanning space
tugged by the sun
and snow
the end running
toward the beginning
a world wider
than a hundred
lifetimes
the moon polished
me bitter bright
a sheen like silvered
tears sinking then like
dye into cloth to rise
a brillant shade
of now.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2009-12-06 19:34:31]
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Re: tilt
(User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on
Sunday, 6th December 2009 @ 10:54:46 PM AEST
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| love the imagery and movement in this poem and the feeling of how vast the world is then the personal journey from bitterness gradually changing |
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Re: tilt
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by spud on
Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 03:50:20 AM AEST
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Hi,
I'm still no closer to fully understanding your
poetry, but I'm always in awe of the way you
formulate your words into magical verse!
You keep on posting and I'll continue to
speculate.
Best wishes!
Tommy
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Re: tilt
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by dirk-velvet on
Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 07:41:24 PM AEST
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It's All So ... Grand !
Lovely Mix Of Words.
Peace&Love
Dirk |
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