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Boxes so high
Contributed by
jjayjay25
on
Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 08:18:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
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These boxes are stacked to the top
They have been empty for awhile
Liquid they bleed
So much it makes you spin
You lose your mind the more blood that is shed
Damaging the breakdown system
Only memories frozen may end up being seen
Tomorrow comes along only to slam your mind
Your vision so blurred
You might be cured only with your sickness
You need to bring back your quickness
The destruction brings back reality
You shut down broken
Only for the clock to run
The longer it goes the more you feel the rumble
Just so bland you cant take it in
Only to add more boxes to bleed once more
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2009-12-07 08:18:11]
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Re: Boxes so high
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by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 08:28:19 AM AEST
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This is very deep and meaningful.
I really like the way you use such imagery
in your words. Brilliant read x
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Re: Boxes so high
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by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 08:28:24 AM AEST
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This is very deep and meaningful.
I really like the way you use such imagery
in your words. Brilliant read x
Star x x x |
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