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Pitch Black heart

Contributed by DemonQueen on Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 08:45:12 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

You shatter the truth and hope to return
The lies will haunt you, in perdition you'll burn
Flickering flames and rising heat
You let out a war cry of mournful defeat
Blind to victory, which lies up ahead
Death holds your life in torment and dread
Trapped in the shadows of pitch black night
A knife through your heart and the end of the line
No light to walk into, but darkened dispair
With aching hearts, and burdens to bear

Copyright © DemonQueen ... [ 2009-12-07 08:45:12]
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Re: Pitch Black heart (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 09:32:54 AM AEST
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Very chilling, and forthright.
Nicely executed Demon, I love it!
Star x x x

Re: Pitch Black heart (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 10th December 2009 @ 06:53:27 AM AEST
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What a straight foward and yet

simplistic strenght this piece has,

truly compelling in it's expression

i love the unsuspecting eliment

in the tittle as well . . .

Ben . . .

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