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Slow Down, Look Around...
Contributed by
lawglen18
on
Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 09:50:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Verse 1
It hurts me very deep
That you're not a lovin me
Baby can't you see
You're the only one for me
But in the end you'll frown
Make me hit the ground
Before I find other ways
Chorus:
Slow down
Look around
You're going too fast
Can't find love
When you're rushing through like that
In the end you'll be missing me
An unrequited tragedy
You still think there's something wrong
But you're lost too deep inside the zone.
Verse 2
Eventually
You're gonna see
How much better
Things could be
If only you would find
I've been here beside you
All of the time
Chorus:
Slow down
Look around
You're going too fast
Can't find love
When you're rushing through like that
In the end you'll be missing me
An unrequited tragedy
You still think there's something wrong
But you're lost too deep inside the zone.
But still my love
You're missing me...
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2009-12-07 21:50:33]
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Re: Slow Down, Look Around...
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by lawglen18 on
Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 10:01:12 PM AEST
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| Not my first lot of poetry, just kind of lost password to previous account. See the rest of the works by user searching law_glen18! |
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Re: Slow Down, Look Around...
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by ABySs on
Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 10:03:58 PM AEST
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| Nice write and I'm sure it does sound good when sung to music |
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Re: Slow Down, Look Around...
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by laststarontheleft on
Tuesday, 8th December 2009 @ 07:10:31 AM AEST
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This sounds great! I love writing lyrics
its great when you put it all together with
the music then get that tingly feeling of creating something really special!
Well done
Star x x x |
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