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Bring it to this
Contributed by
jjayjay25
on
Tuesday, 8th December 2009 @ 12:25:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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As darkness falls deeper and deeper The more awake I become From the shadows of the depths I bring forth the being I feel so keen to the slow motion around This mystical power I have to abide by What embraces me I just cant be let loose Im going to explode if these chains stay on me The way there so tight I felt that the balance may turn into a fight A fight for the end it needs no command For the demand of this moment it needs no commitment Only if I find the right heading To be free from this setting It finally has come Only to be brought forth with the dawn Oh burning flames how they came so quickly Itching as they ran up upon me I can feel the growth The new power has come to move forth
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Re: Bring it to this
(User Rating: 1 ) by laststarontheleft on
Tuesday, 8th December 2009 @ 06:26:05 AM AEST (User
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Hi,
This is fantastically moody! Great chunks
of black magic in here, I can close my eyes
and jst imagine the scene spilling out in front of me! Welll done x
Brilliant piece of writing Jay.
Star x x x
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