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That First Kiss
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 01:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I'll never forget
That first kiss
The way you touched me
When you looked so deeply
Into my eyes
Then leaned forward
And pressed your lips to mine
I remember
The way you reached for
My hand
Grasped it and held on
That moment will never
Be forgotten
As long as we both shall live
The way you trembled
Will forever remain in
My mind
I'll never let go
As long as you
Keep holding on to me
Copyright ©
ShadowsCloud
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2003-04-05 01:45:00]
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Re: That First Kiss
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by Silent-Cry on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 01:27:56 PM AEST
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| this is so sweet and beautifully written!i like ur other poems as well...keep the wonders flowing! |
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Re: That First Kiss
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 01:40:44 AM AEST
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Oh how I envy your lovely moment so perfectly preserved
You Inspire me to try this theme but mine was rather less romantic. |
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Re: That First Kiss
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 08:14:22 AM AEST
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Another very well written piece on this wonderful, but hard to put into words, subject!
Excellently done Candice, from what I remember of the now very distant past, your words describe these best of moments in life perfectly.
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: That First Kiss
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 03:17:49 PM AEST
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Dean,
I am glad you think that I can describe these moments so well. I think that I do so well on any of my poetry because I write about things that I am highly passionate about.
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