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lost at sea
Contributed by
sparkfire777
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Tuesday, 8th December 2009 @ 05:25:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Three clicks to the right
White caps on the rise
There is no end in sight
True this isnt wise
Wind blowing from the west
Crew pushing to extreme
Hoping for the best
Sails ripping from the seam
Dipping to the left
Rolling to the right
My lower lip I bite
My end is now in sight
With my last breath I pray
All men are in the raft
Down with serenity I will go
I take my final bath
The sea is still
The wind is calm
200 feet I lay
In my final resting place
With a smile there I stay
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sparkfire777
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2009-12-08 17:25:58]
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Re: lost at sea
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 8th December 2009 @ 05:42:53 PM AEST
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Intense!
I love the ocean but sure wouldn't want to ride a storm out there!
I watch deadliest catch this reminded me alot of that.
Good work, nice flow and very gripping, it has my heart thumping harder than normal!
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