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Love Letter
Contributed by
daylynn_van_wyk
on
Wednesday, 9th December 2009 @ 10:14:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Sealed kisses
wrapped within chocolate metaphors,
sweet nothings
whispered without distorted flaws.
A love letter,
the cradle for loving dreams
a forgotten oasis found on page
the distance, the pain
the yearning and rage.
Feelings melt
falling into colourful ink
a joyous dance begins
through a path passions mold,
inspired by memories
a beautiful message unfolds.
Kept neatly;
he scribes within the blue sky lines,
bright graffiti on a cloud
so she may view from afar....
The white clouds soon grow heavy,
the ink and tear drops fall through
drying in three words,
which simply read, "...I Love You."
Copyright ©
daylynn_van_wyk
... [
2009-12-09 10:14:12]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Love Letter
(User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on
Wednesday, 9th December 2009 @ 10:57:02 AM AEST
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| Beautiful poem appealing to all the senses,'sealed kisses wrapped within chocolate metaphors,'my fav line |
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Re: Love Letter
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by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 9th December 2009 @ 11:16:19 AM AEST
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Sumptuously delicious!
Beautifully written.....
Star x x x |
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Re: Love Letter
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by elle on
Wednesday, 9th December 2009 @ 03:10:10 PM AEST
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| I love the entire write. Simply de-lish! elle :) |
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