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Trawlermen
Contributed by
Fuzzy
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Thursday, 10th December 2009 @ 10:07:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Sea so cruel waves like mountains high crash down with mighty force upon the deck wind blows sky dark above seagulls sigh fly inland for shelter wind upon neck
No man on deck just skipper at the wheel men pray below for safety of the shore skipper drawn tired fights for even keel decks awash thunder calls aft and fore
Below the deck a young man crouched in fear just his second time at sea he thinks of mother old Tom goes to comfort him trawlerman of many year wraps one arm around the lad stare at each other
Tiny vessel tossed like a toy the sea to play gale so strong waves so high crash fore and aft men below crouch and pray to see another day skipper fights the wheel to save this craft
Steers for port with all his strength and fight his men below he thinks to land them safe at last a calm in the distant of the night weary worn tiny vessel steadies won the chase
Men sign and cry below now for port there bound again there loved ones will see all safe sound
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Re: Trawlermen
(User Rating: 1 ) by northernlights on
Thursday, 10th December 2009 @ 11:05:15 PM AEST (User
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Lovely poem! I have the greatest respect for these guys. I like the way you have put warmth into the poem with part story and their ultimate aim to be safely home again. |
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Re: Trawlermen
(User Rating: 1 ) by spud on
Friday, 11th December 2009 @ 12:38:08 AM AEST (User
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Hi,
Well written. Could smell it, touch it, see it!
Brought back some scary moments.
Tommy
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Re: Trawlermen
(User Rating: 1 ) by laststarontheleft on
Friday, 11th December 2009 @ 07:35:18 AM AEST (User
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A fantastic write paul as always x
you just keep getting better and better!
very vivid and raw x
Lisa x x x |
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