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The Forgotten
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
on
Friday, 11th December 2009 @ 03:07:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I am one of The Forgotten
I have fallen
They just throw me away
Have the words I say dont matter so why try
I stand on these roofs
Looking out upon all that has been and gone
I found a place to hang this noose
I have fallen
I am one of The Forgotten
What causes me feel this way?
Why cant I was this away?
Why cant I forget what Ive done?
What have I become?
I am one of The Forgotten
I have fallen
What ever pain may come
So I can forget what Ive done
What Ive become
So I must become one of
The Forgotten
Copyright ©
Voice of the Silent
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2009-12-11 15:07:13]
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Re: The Forgotten
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by Fuzzy on
Friday, 11th December 2009 @ 04:11:10 PM AEST
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I think this is very well written
Take care |
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Re: The Forgotten
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 04:25:50 AM AEST
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the image on the roof top truly vivid
the noose is very symbolic
this poem was quite a saga
reminded me of a really dark western
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