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Desolo
Contributed by
BAV
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Friday, 11th December 2009 @ 09:10:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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Walked for years through mud and mire,
stifled my misery and woe.
Never grew faint nor showed tire,
loss of hope my paramount foe.
In places dry, void of water,
I did not want, I drank my fill.
God protected me from slaughter,
I remained well while others ill.
But my savior escapes me now,
a tribunal held for my sin.
Repent? If I've no sins then how?
It would seem Gods mercy run thin.
Denied, Jesus now turned Judas,
wallow in the idea of my shock.
Executioner feels no albatross,
how i felt... my head on the block.
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BAV
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Re: Desolo
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by shelby on
Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 01:09:10 AM AEST
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This poem is something I can say I do relate too.
It is well written and very touching.
Good luck on your journey.
Michelle |
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Re: Desolo
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by Fuzzy on
Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 01:47:37 AM AEST
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I myself at times have many doubts, I am not deeply religious, but do believe but at times i wonder?.
well written
Take care |
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Re: Desolo
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by laststarontheleft on
Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 01:06:32 PM AEST
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Hi BAV,
This is an exceptional write, well done x
Star x x x |
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