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No Sleeps
Contributed by
b_lee
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Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 01:01:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I look into the mirror of life,
and see the night sky.
I see that all around me, other
stars twinkle brighter than I.
With no hope to compare,
no one cares about that one,
who never bares about their life.
Its funny that I dont believe myself.
So here I sit, admiring from afar.
Just as fast as the sun sets, a
thought occurs to me.
Do others stare at me?
From across the universe,
many pause to look,
or perhaps its more a glare.
One thing is clear: none shall
sleep tonight, for who knows
if I will be here tomorrow.
Copyright ©
b_lee
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2009-12-12 01:01:40]
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Re: No Sleeps
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by Fuzzy on
Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 01:42:40 AM AEST
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Really liked this.
Take care |
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Re: No Sleeps
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by shelby on
Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 02:05:42 AM AEST
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Rich in emotion, a very beautiful write.
Michelle |
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Re: No Sleeps
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by Xnoybis on
Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 06:08:36 AM AEST
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I'm pausing. I'm looking, not glaring.
"It’s funny that I don’t believe myself." really cracked me up, because often I don't. I appreciate the vantage point. |
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Re: No Sleeps
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th December 2009 @ 11:18:04 PM AEST
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I like this poem because it reminds us that we are not perfect
That we all have doubts
But that most of us have the strenght to carry on
Hence we are still here trying
Very human perspective,Thank you
-D.Truth |
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