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Seasonal (Comings and Goings)
Contributed by
Xnoybis
on
Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 05:48:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I - Comings
She's holding on
Holding on to you
tight and safe
against the night
Against the unknowns
that tomorrow might bring
And when she finds
all it offers
is more of the same
she'll be safe
on her own
for one more day
the only thing changing
in your small world
the seasons of her
comings and goings
II - Goings
The cold
winter wind
blows right through me
Like the words
you carefully
construct
Seasonal repitition
Following its own
footprints
In the blizzard of snow
That passes for
your train of thought
the white street lights
repeating
on the way out of town
Like dangling carrots
the wet pavement
underneath the wheels
a more sincere landscape
than your
tear-stained face
The early come dusk
A metaphor
you can't recognize
Copyright ©
Xnoybis
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2009-12-12 05:48:27]
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Re: Seasonal (Comings and Goings)
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by shelby on
Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 11:56:43 PM AEST
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You touched me a great deal with this one.
This is lovely poetry.
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