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Hurt Inside
Contributed by
Anu
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Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 12:39:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I saw a frame picturing you and me,
Love was visible gleaming on the lips.
I was choked and I forgot to breathe,
When you went away, my life became a myth..
My body felt void of soul, annul and empty,
I stared at spaces without blinking my eyelid..!
Time would fly, giving me no clue of it passing by..
Months passed by, sorrows and tears had a tie..!
Food had no taste; neither did I have an appetite,
I had lost sense of what was wrong and what right..!
You left me nothing but a picture, carved deep inside;
A drop of blood rolled by, from the vein I couldnt hide..!
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Anu
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Re: Hurt Inside
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by Fuzzy on
Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 01:32:29 PM AEST
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Very emotional, great write.Does love takes more from you than it gives, sometimes yes but for me i am still pleased that i had that love once, but can be so hard to let it go.
Take care
this part i really liked
You left me nothing but a picture, carved deep inside;
A drop of blood rolled by, from the vein I couldn’t hide..!
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Re: Hurt Inside
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by Jammy on
Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 11:55:36 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem! I thought you really captured your emotions and put them into words. By reading this, I can somewhat understand how you feel. I'm in a similar position right now.
Hang tuff. And remember. "No one is worth your tears. But those who are, won't make you cry in the first place." It's kept me going when I felt alone and out of place.
~Jammy~ |
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