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Awakening
Contributed by
jessie4queen
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Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 06:14:18 AM in AEST
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I opened my eyes to see the world outside,
To my surprise I woke up to a chaotic war,
Things have changed from once when I was here,
My heart rumbles with each beat,
We are tomorrow.
The things we do will forever change the future,
We will be the ones to look upon,
Shall we make selfish decisions now for the present,
Or shall we think through and make a decision for the future?
Because we are the future,
So let's not mess up today.
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2009-12-14 06:14:18]
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Re: Awakening
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by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 09:38:48 AM AEST
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Very well said!
we are all responsible for the future
and what we shall leave behind us.
great write!
Star x x x
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Re: Awakening
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by Aspirant on
Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 12:51:16 AM AEST
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| So, do you call for a revolution or hope that the administration will do the right thing? |
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