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Outrunning sunset
Contributed by
Libertina
on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 08:47:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Outrunning sunset
Twilight whistles through the branches
Of a mind - maps so obscure
Leading nowhere do they- hence
Through a fence a fear it launches.
Split apart nut- cracking heartbeats
Beat me hard,on knees endure
I
to hear both lust and longing
Sing of spring and silver sun seeds
Curl your lips and be but cunning
Turn the world to be but mine
Burn the bed and send me running
Far from you I will be thine.
Copyright ©
Libertina
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2009-12-14 08:47:13]
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Re: Outrunning sunset
(User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 09:22:15 AM AEST
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Hi Libertina
This is a really lovely write, even in its sadness x
Welcome to ypdc
Star x x x |
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Re: Outrunning sunset
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by Alexa_Bachtel on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 09:46:35 AM AEST
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Hi, Libertina,
Very beautiful and sad poem.
My best wishes to ya.
Alexa. |
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Re: Outrunning sunset
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by shelby on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 09:41:46 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC,
this had a great deal of feeling in it.
Lovely flow, wonderful work.
Michelle |
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Re: Outrunning sunset
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th December 2009 @ 07:47:01 AM AEST
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Your presence is that of an ancient one
There is no question you are gifted
Yours is few and Far between
Fierce, breath taking and and an honor to read
-D.Truth |
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