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What love does to me
Contributed by
sara
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Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
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Love does to me,
what Achilles heel did to him.
Love does to me,
what pride did to the hare, thinking he was the very best,
all he needed to do was step down with the rest.
Love does to me,
what women did to Soloman.
Love does to me,
what harsh rain does to flowers,
makes them droop down like that for hours.
Love makes me weak, it becomes hard to speak.
Love makes me believe I am all I can be.
Yes, thats what love does to me
Copyright ©
sara
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2003-04-05 10:35:00]
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Re: What love does to me
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by hardcoreputa on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 10:48:29 AM AEST
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| interesting... good write but i was wondering if love is worth it if it makes you so weak??? anyways i liked it.. keep writing |
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Re: What love does to me
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by LJ on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 11:16:38 AM AEST
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This is a good write.
I personally don't think that love makes us weak, but just makes our already present weaknesses clearer to us. So I believe that it is worth it. But I assume that you are talking more of the weak in the knees type of weak.
Well done! |
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Re: What love does to me
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by Sara on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 02:49:07 PM AEST
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Thats exactly what I meant... the weak in the knees... Thanks for the feedback :)
<3 Sara |
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Re: What love does to me
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 12:01:27 AM AEST
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| this is beautiful:) hugs nessa |
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