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Drifting
Contributed by
Fuzzy
on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 01:59:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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In thought of deep emotions life and all its test
drifting as a ghost inside my mind all reminding
was once a time place love feelings of peace rest
just drifting in the shadows of my life and quest
Was strong with a passion of love and devotion
now left to drift forever there all consuming
just reminders of past love as if in slow motion
drifting as a life inside as if lost creation
Seeking out corners of my mind once was mine
then drift on leaving memory of something past
yes just a memory drifting as if searching time
drift on forever asking seeking out the last
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Fuzzy
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2009-12-14 13:59:01]
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Re: Drifting
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by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 02:07:23 PM AEST
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Your words just keep drifting over like a warming blanket..... so lovely x
Beautifully written fuzzy x
Star x x x |
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Re: Drifting
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 07:31:45 PM AEST
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Excellent flow
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