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The Chambers Were Empty
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 01:59:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Such a matallic taste
this life feels like such a waste
I could have ended it so fast
Forever in my memory the taste will last
So very cold
As I had it in my hold
One move and fire
Would have been my disire
Thoughtful of the rest
What would be best?
Even if I was to die
I can't bare the thought of seeing them cry
Now I feel sic
Thinking of the taste
What sickens me more still
Is the sound that rings in my mind
After so much time
That click click click
The chambers were empy
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2009-12-14 13:59:27]
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Re: The Chambers Were Empty
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by SilentMuse on
Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 08:26:00 PM AEST
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| to think that you could have died, I must admit to being one who would Have cried -Sarah |
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