|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Heartless
Contributed by
SilentMuse
on
Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 05:56:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
Just another piece of a to large heart
Another piece allowed to fall apart
One torn and given, on riped away
One distroyed by leaving
Another choosing to stay
Piece after piece of a to large heart
Slowly tearing my world apart
A piece for a friend
A piece for a dream
A piece for a nightmare
Tearing sanity at the seems
A heart growing smaller everyday
This fact makes me wonder
Will it soon go away?
Copyright ©
SilentMuse
... [
2009-12-15 05:56:59]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Heartless
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on
Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 06:23:44 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I think this is very good well written.
Take care |
|
|
Re: Heartless
(User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on
Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 06:45:33 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I really like your use of words here.
Very well written...
Star x x x |
|
|
Re: Heartless
(User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on
Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 11:56:25 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
There are more peices to a heart then you know, you never run out so long as you don't want to, I think I read this before, it is very good, we'll see if we can mend your heart one day, as for your sanity, if you're insane you hide it well it may lay underneath but I think you're fairly mentally stable
hope to read more soon
-Kelly
(kirby poke) :D |
|
|
Re: Heartless
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 03:06:35 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
It's a wonderul piece,I imagine if it where a
portrait the colors whould spill from the canvas.
This poem is so real it's not enough to just read it
for there is so much more.
It was intoxicating to read, very pleasing.
-D.Truth |
|
|
Re: Heartless
(User Rating: 1 )
by ChaosFactor on
Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 06:22:42 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is very good.. Actually, it's breathtaking.
I'm sorry. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
