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MY MIRROR WORLD
Contributed by
DoubleS
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Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 12:39:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A mirror to you
Could show your reflection,
Through my eyes youll see
Another dimension.
I see the same world
I have seen in my dreams,
Its hard to escape
I dont want to it seems.
I wish it was real
I love seeing your face,
As it starts to fade
Till its gone not a trace.
My minds like a mirror
Reflects what I want,
Its also like a ghost
Always seems to haunt.
But I dont mind
Kinda funny it seems,
As my mind reflects back
On my memories.
Memories of you
They are as clear as day,
I view into my mind
As time slips away.
Ill stay in this world
For the rest of this day
Knowing you are mine
Forever and always
Copyright ©
DoubleS
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2009-12-15 12:39:02]
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Re: MY MIRROR WORLD
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by Fuzzy on
Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 12:58:32 PM AEST
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Just read the firs,t and all i can say is fantastic.
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Re: MY MIRROR WORLD
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by longhaircg on
Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 05:44:12 PM AEST
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I read both and my applauds you wrote this so deep and caught my every thought awsome write
thankyou
SP |
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Re: MY MIRROR WORLD
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by laststarontheleft on
Tuesday, 5th January 2010 @ 10:50:35 AM AEST
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This poem has such a gentle tenderness about it,
caressing the loving memories you have with such care, really beautifully done x
Star x x x
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