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Time Traveler
Contributed by
SilentMuse
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Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 06:55:30 PM in AEST
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maybe thats whats wrong with me
I don't belong in this century
maybe I'm from long in the past
or maybe a time to which i won't last
I'm not all that sure what time I'm from
all I know is this isn't the one
I've come to understand that I don't fit in
my thoughts are strange, they have no twin
ideas so different I can't begin to explain
my values are tangled, morals rearranged
here I just can't be what I want to be
and maybe just maybe thats whats wrong with me
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2009-12-15 18:55:30]
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Re: Time Traveler
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by Voice of the Silent on
Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 07:35:23 PM AEST
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Could be, but if you weren't here this place would be boring as hell, you may feel like you don't belong, it maybe true, I've never seen anyone like you, but you would be missed and if you hadn't been here things would be different in a bad way. So, if you get a time machine don't go take me with you so I can find mine, honestly there's to much wrong with this time
Good write, but don't go, it just wouldn't be the same
-Kelly |
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Re: Time Traveler
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by gravity1665 on
Wednesday, 16th December 2009 @ 03:12:16 AM AEST
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| graet poem and comment. peace |
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Re: Time Traveler
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by fallensaint on
Friday, 18th December 2009 @ 05:56:38 PM AEST
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| U know I think ur absolutly right. I don't feel like I belong at all and maybe we don't. But like Kelly said, please don't go. Ur one reason that I'm able to stay in my right mind. Great poem |
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Re: Time Traveler
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by XslainhopeX on
Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 02:27:53 AM AEST
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I know how you feel. And believe it or not me and you have come to the realization that our thoughts are quite alike. Don't go babe because the world and more importantly I need you here. Without you here i would be like your last poem per say..... Missing a piece of my already scarred heart. Great write babe....
- Ronald (aka XslainhopeX) |
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Re: Time Traveler
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by rfburn on
Tuesday, 29th December 2009 @ 10:27:49 PM AEST
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| You're OK with me. BTW - I'm not from this time period either. Get over it - you're not alone. |
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Re: Time Traveler
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th July 2014 @ 10:46:26 PM AEST
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I'm sure there's nothing wrong with you but I can relate to the feelings.
I like the title and the idea. Nicely written.
I hope by now that you have found that you're not all so different and have found someone or others that are very similar to confirm such.
Take care,
Tim |
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